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Questions
24 May, 2003
Author: Megzy

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I wonder
I ponder
Those questions throughout the day
And often throughout the night
Should I go?
Should I stay?
Will I ever know what is right?

I write down the pros
Also the cons
Do I want to be alone
to be free?
Or do I want to be captured
and chained to thee?
I want to be free... on my own
but what would you do
Could I live without you?

Grrrr!
Is all I have to say
I need some answers
Not more questions!!
but that will never happen
Life cannot be simple or easy

I don't want to hurt you
I would never want to do that
but being with you often hurts me

I sit and stare at the ceiling
Watching the cobwebs come
If only they could tell me what to do
Lead me along the path
Should I fly away?
or sit tight?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

shan (205.188.209.16) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 12:38 am

hold tight

i feel the same way.. expressed it in many of my poems.. i suggest ya hold tight.. maybe the cobwebs mite not answer things for ya.. but something eventually will. luv ur poems.. keep it up
ashley nb (12.222.12.163) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 02:39 am

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i liked it, great great great.id like to discuss the meaning of the poem sometime. luv ya and your poems!
Meridian Zuriel (152.163.252.104) -- Friday, February 6 2004, 11:52 pm

Extravangant!

You hit it right on the nail!
Laura Owens (199.29.196.5) -- Friday, February 24 2006, 03:18 pm

I love this

I like the poem... but what got me was your ending... "should i fly away, or sit tight?" I like this poem because it makes you think about your own circumstances...
 
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