Cold To Fire
1 June, 2002
Author: Mental
The lightening dust appeared
the dark hour
has been sheared.
inside were holes of light
but my thick emotions
closed them tight.
it's not a good day
until it ends
it's not a full life
but then it depends.
unless you used the shiny metal
cold to fire
at first it's a soft petal
that only your thin skin could admire.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Stacey (68.82.127.64) -- Sunday, October 20 2002, 04:04 pm I can't decide which poem of yours i like the most. I read all of them. They're all intense. How long ago did it happen? I'd love to read more, I wonder who she is. ~Stacey |
| mental (66.153.207.54) -- Tuesday, October 22 2002, 01:11 am stacey, thank you for the 'intense' comment. how long ago was it? 1987 when i was 18 she was somebody i could never have way beyond my grips a long story but something worth writing about. hey thanks again for your comment |
| mental (66.153.165.92) -- Tuesday, October 22 2002, 01:12 am stacey, thank you for the 'intense' comment. how long ago was it? 1987 when i was 18 she was somebody i could never have way beyond my grips a long story but something worth writing about. hey thanks again for your comment |
| tzuhsi (152.163.252.200) -- Thursday, December 4 2003, 03:39 pm Mental I love this poem. It was full of intense emotions. Very beautifully written....Also I am very very sorry about your loss |
| mental (66.153.163.121) -- Friday, December 5 2003, 04:03 am thank you very much for that comment. oh this girl drove me lust crazy at the age of 18 but, i never knew what happened to her it's been 13 yrs since i was in contact with her. |
| mental (66.153.163.121) -- Friday, December 5 2003, 04:21 am nice to see one of my old poems on the new comment page, thanks |
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