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The Reasons Were Petrified
1 June, 2002
Author: Mental

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visions red
say you're dead
sweating profusely
in my head.
dreams envisioned
through an emotional window pane
my soul is imprisoned
roofless and exposed to your rain.
all reasons were petrified
imprinted clearly on my mind.
i thought you were my allied
but you faked me fine.
full of night
thick moments cover
her touch that hit my height
for that moment made her my lover.

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KristenK3 (63.191.233.61) -- Thursday, January 16 2003, 07:13 am

thick moments that cover her touch that hit my height...

This line is brilliant...hit my height...I sense total abandonment, losing form and substance...wow...but a resistance too. Fantastic imge/concpt, sweetie. Thank you, love,K
KristenK3 (63.191.233.61) -- Thursday, January 16 2003, 07:20 am

Hey, read the two

Hey love, again. Did you ever read the two poems I wrote for/about you, both with Mental in the title. One is "Mental minded" and the other...I don't remember, but wanted to make sure you'd seen them. Love,K
 
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