To Easily Take My Life
6 August, 2000
Author: Mental
To scared to kill myself
i think not
i just haven't found the right place, the right moment
or the right spot.
i haven't found the right instruments
more than a shiny knife
there's got to be things out there
to easily take my life.
i don't want my pain to last
i don't want it to wander
i want a quick getaway fast
so my mind won't have to ponder.
do an overdose
take different kind of pills
fall into an comatose
until finally it kills.
fantasy and reality
won't matter anymore
i'll be dead and gone
no more settlement of a score.
we won't be even
in life i always lost
you'll remember me
during a winter frost.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| tzuhsi (152.163.253.37) -- Thursday, December 4 2003, 03:54 am Wow mental this is a great poem. its like you went into my soul and pulled out everyone of my emotions. I love this poem so much. Very well written. Its as if you are inside me speaking for me |
| tzuhsi (66.72.30.134) -- Friday, December 5 2003, 08:32 am Wow mental this is a great poem. its like you went into my soul and pulled out everyone of my emotions. I love this poem so much. Very well written. Its as if you are inside me speaking for me |
| mental (66.153.165.18) -- Thursday, December 11 2003, 01:33 am thank you ,thank you very much. you do the same for me also. |
| tzuhsi (152.163.252.227) -- Friday, December 12 2003, 12:07 am hey there mental do you think i can borrow this poem to show to one of my many doctors. this poem right here says everything i have been wanting to say but not been able to say. i would really appreciate it. i don't care what people might say about my perspectives on things this is one of my favorite peomes. i love it so much. and i know you weren't talking for me but i do thank you so much for puting this on the site. i feel as if you are talking about me and maybe you just didn't know it......keep it up mental |
| some one who cares (198.81.26.110) -- Saturday, December 13 2003, 07:11 pm you dont have to kill your selfh its not the answer the answer is looking to god about your problems i know you say well who cares cause every body tells me that espesially old people. well im only 14 and tryed doing that one time i allmost took my life away but my sis saw me and started cryin i didnt know she cared but she tolld me that i would have went to hell. And i would have to and she allso tolld me that god had loved me to. know i live day bye day. without liveing day bye day in darkness. befor you think about doin any of that think whear you will end up. |
| tzuhsi (205.188.209.48) -- Saturday, December 13 2003, 10:18 pm Mental I have read the rest of your poems and still think this is my favorite. I am jealous about the girl you write about in your poems. If only I had someone to care for me as you do for this girl. I haven't seen you post any new poems recently hope to see some in the future. Wish you the best. And I appreciate the nice comments you have given me on my poems |
| kid (172.56.5.29) -- Saturday, March 28 2015, 10:39 pm Hey I know what you are saying, I hope you are alright. |
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