Suicide Notes by Mental

suicide
along for the ride
suicide
to hell with pride.
under six feet of grass
oh! suicide
by my wrist shards of glass.
suicide
come close to me
comfort my conscience
for you i want to see.
suicide
you're my last grip
my only glimpse of reality
as i feel my blood drip
a deadly fatality.
for suicide
is the deadly firearm
suicide is the grace
that flashes across my brain
for this human race
is blurry like the rain.
suicide is a bottle of pills
suicide is the sun
suicide is the bottle on your window sill
ready to have some fun ?

Your Melody (207.190.93.62) -- Saturday, December 28 2002, 03:29 am

Wow
When I read this poem, i thought about one time of my life, when i tried to commit suicide. And I thought of this one boy who was a year younger than me, who committed suicide 3 weeks after I tried to myself. I knew his family quite well, and I hated him for puting his family through that. I hated myself even more for even considering puting my family and friends through that. Ever day is struggle, but I'm getting through it. When I got to the end of your poem, i couldn't believe that I had just read it all. I had to go over and read it again. All i really have to say, is this is a great poem, and you are a great poem writer, keep up the great work.

to your melody (66.153.163.69) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 02:33 am

from mental to your melody
thank you very much i wrote that about 5 yrs ago .
suicide poems are still my thing should read more of my stuff and again thanks

Jessica (173.19.142.181) -- Tuesday, January 15 2013, 08:05 pm

Amazing
I can feel the emotion I. The poem, as every victim f these thoughts can, I tired once, but couldn't take it through, but I read poems and I wright them, but im not brave enought to out them on here, knowing it woudl show everything, I work s hard to hide

mental (206.74.61.129) -- Wednesday, January 30 2013, 04:25 pm

thank you jessica
thank you for comment

rage (66.153.240.162) -- Thursday, September 5 2013, 01:05 am

want
makes me want to meet suicide again. just to say hi. a long time foe.

Raibow (172.58.155.122) -- Friday, September 4 2020, 11:37 pm

To mental
Who alot of visionary's on this one. Very good

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