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Honey Rain
22 June, 2000
Author: Mental

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honey rain
soothes the pain
in which sometimes
i can't substain.
molded night's so somber
but the taste of love
makes me wander.
emotions run
with loves
smoking gun
yet bullets of lust
have just begun.

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dija (74.184.154.116) -- Monday, January 7 2008, 09:41 pm

nice

some people think the best poems are really long and intricate, not mine, and yours is great.
 
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