Freedom
6 August, 2002
Author: Barbara Goodhew
To be a bird would be nice.
Soaring up high in the sky.
Nobody to give you unwanted advice.
No stresses,when weather turns cold fly to warm places.
Tour the world for free.
Oh to be a bird and to be that free.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Rose Goodgrace (62.252.132.147) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 09:43 pm Why do you have ths on your website a 10 year old could of made this up. I acme on here to gwet some nice poetry and i got this well thats the last time i come on here again. Its a discrace!!!!!!!! |
| barb (66.46.230.162) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 05:57 am well thanks for the comment you thought a 10 year old wrote this I'm 7 buteveryone thinks I'm older |
| barb (66.46.230.162) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 06:08 am If you want good poetry read the experienced people poems not us kids |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.140) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 10:55 am The vision of freedom i got from this poem was beauitful Barb!! I could see myself soaring through the sky unwanted advice free!! Then my freedom was rudely interrupted by someone with a stick shoved up there arse! Loved your responses back to her Barb! |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 12:52 pm This is a beautiful poem Barb and I wish I was that bird with the freedom you described so well. You really do write so well for your age, despite what another person thinks...I think from what LinzAy says that person may be in may be in pain!! |
| Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 02:06 pm Oh really? You're leaving and not coming back? You won't be missed... I assure you. |
| Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 02:08 pm Capricorn, she was being sarcastic. She's not really 7 :). |
| barb (66.46.241.57) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 04:29 pm thanks everyone and by the way I'm 8 lol shhhh seizure don't tell any one how old I really am lol |
| barb (66.46.241.57) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 04:37 pm for some reason I piss people off. lol |
| barb (66.46.241.57) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 04:41 pm she's is a pain even if she is suffering don't take it out on the site one poem and she had to pick that one lol |
| soar-bird (65.57.71.4) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 11:03 pm Rose, Rose, bad comments your not suppose Perhaps your mind is tired, staying up late with no-dose Have you no feelings, for those you impose? Rose, Rose, get a grip, go plant some rose Be nice to seven year olds, because your too old To understand a nice poem that was told Be a bird, fly away in the rain Your unwanted advice, a pain Soar high Rose Goodgrace, Your the disgrace I'm 5 years old. |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 12:37 am Soar bird... I like that!....you writ goo for a 5 yr old too, hehe! |
| barb (66.46.241.57) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 03:08 am thank-you for the support we have to stick together our little minds lol |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.232) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 06:59 am hehehehehe.....all this made me giggle! ti-he-he....... |
| Martin Vann (65.57.58.67) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 04:44 pm Simple logic, written in simple words, beautiful expression, wish I could fly. Simple words, that feel so clean and fresh. I love the freedom your words express. A little bird that can escape the summer heat and winter cold while we throw wood on the fire or try and get our air conditioner fixed! I love this short story, not bad for seven year old. Barb, what a compliment to have someone think your ten again? Thank You, MartinV |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 06:38 pm What true words martin, take note barb...in this poem you have captured all the freshnees of youth! How wonderful! |
| barb (66.46.230.81) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 02:47 am thank-you my mind may be 10 but my body is 90 lol |
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