Wish It Rains by Moonstarshine

Trickling slow
down my cheek
drops of hope
myriad of dreams.
Fallen pearls
on the floor
one by one
all scatter
anyone care
it doesnt matter.
The wind is strong
clouds surround
darkness around
Storm raging
in my mind
heart's a stranger
closing its door
once more
in silence
peace..
it will find
no more hurt
no more pain
oh god! I wish
it rains
so I can wash
my tears
away.

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, February 17 2004, 11:06 pm

very beautiful
this is a very good poem.i feel like this alot.good work!-heaven-

Martin Vann (171.75.207.171) -- Thursday, February 19 2004, 08:14 pm

Naked in the moonlite of thought, you are clothed in love
Moonstarshine:

You are not alone, except, for your poetry, which places you out in front of myself, there you are, clothed in words of beauty, yet, you take them off, naked as you are, but not ashamed, for even, a lonely heart, has been shown by you, to have beauty laced with grace of thought and emotion.

Many of us, just like you, have our heart's door closed, yet with your pen, in a hidden way, your heart has opened, once again. This time, as you feel the warmth, of the sunshine, cleansed, by a recent rain, your heart is once again a-live, radiant and as a butterfly, we are the guests, over which you fly.

Beautiful! Thank You

Martin V

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