Waltzing In Dreams
28 December, 2003
Author: Moonstarshine
The sun ascends
slowly, high above,
dreamy night
comes to an end
my love.
endearing words
locked us in a trance,
rhymes we made
on tunes we danced.
Those moments now,
take a bend
my love.
Another night
comes and goes
leaving behind a gift..
your treasured thoughts
for me,
my love.
Why does a smile
linger still upon your lips,
dont you know?
the Sun hides the Moon
my love?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Brenda Michelle (209.240.207.249) -- Wednesday, December 31 2003, 06:06 am i also like this poem, like i said in your other poem. keep up the great work of art hope to read more from you. p.s here is a rose for you. @--,--- |
| Silkened Moon (204.31.225.15) -- Wednesday, December 31 2003, 05:14 pm I loved it from the first to the last line, especially this one: "...endearing words locked us in a trance...". That line was absolutely beautiful and romantic! I loved every moment of the reading, keep writing and I'll keep reading! Awesome work! |
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