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I Love You T
29 December, 2003
Author: Moonstarshine

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I see the hurt in his eyes
the pain he goes through
his sadness..each day
multiplies.
In every word..the silence speaks
volumes of emotions of
what his heart seeks.
I want to tell him,
I cherish his love..
sometimes things are
just not meant from above.
Its not all about trying and
winning the game,
when fate has its own rules
we cannot change.
Destiny signed and sealed
oh what a shame!
Choices made.. are ours to take
only we know what decisions to make.
Life takes more out of what it gives
love becomes a sacrifice
for letting others to live.
If he reads this, let him know
he is the best my life has known.
If I were to give him
back his heart..
a part from it would
certainly be amiss
for it got absorbed into my soul
the soul...that he has kissed.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Silkened Moon (206.214.71.240) -- Tuesday, December 30 2003, 03:20 pm

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Nicely spoken! I love the way you reached out in this poem to sort of show the reader the very essence of what "he" has done to you in this poem fictional or what not! I loved it from the first to the last line, great work!
Fiorella Venturino (67.30.1.224) -- Tuesday, December 30 2003, 10:16 pm

Beautiful

I can see why he loves you so much and hasnt givent up on you...and why he never will.
I hope you two will be happy together soon ^_^
You are very talented...and have so much to live for.
My best wishes to you and your mate, (the real one...T.)
-Fiorella Venturino
Kaitlyn Tucker (216.125.32.226) -- Thursday, January 29 2004, 08:33 pm

I think I understand now

I know T, he is awsome and I hope what is ment to be happens...
fairy (207.144.224.155) -- Monday, February 9 2004, 09:22 pm

speachless

It is a hartfelt poem with so much beauty in the words that it speeks...it makes me speachless
 
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