What Are You Waiting For
4 September, 2003
Author: Morgan
Shattered and broken,
Torn wide open,
The cuts forever bleeding,
This razor forever sharp,
Bleeding away the troubles you face each day,
As each morning comes every problem takes its place,
Wrists,ankles, and hips,
What are you waiting for?
The razor awaits your next slash,
Your eyes look forward to the blood stained floor,
What are you waiting for?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Timothy Reynolds (216.165.188.103) -- Tuesday, October 14 2003, 11:05 pm I don't know about you but, I think one should get some help if they're to this point!!! Though it may not seem like it now, there still may be a lot of good things in life coming very soon!!! |
| Elizabeth (209.153.132.45) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 10:14 pm I really know how you feel. But you cant think of all the bad that you have been in but think of the good in life. You dont need all the scars that it leaves I have them to but they will grow less and less visible. You are to young to do all this to your self and there is so much ahead of you that if you over come this you will realize how glad you are that you have never suceeded. IF you need some one to talk to email me ok. selena08@hotmail.com |
| Dragonsinger (216.18.150.223) -- Saturday, November 13 2004, 10:43 pm What the hell, people. Cut some slack here. Cutting is their release, their way of dealing with the world. If they cut, they cut. |
| dark3nstar (4.239.231.239) -- Friday, April 15 2005, 09:58 pm yea i think that people need to not comment if they dont like someones poem... i liked it and i think that you should use this as another release too |
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