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Will You Cry
4 October, 2003
Author: Morgan

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What would you do if you found of I cry?
What about if you knew that I lie?
Or if you knew I want to die?
What would you do?
Would you care for me?
Or let me fade away alone?
Cry at night?
Would you pretend like it was nothing and not shed a tear?
Do you think you'd remember me from year to year?
Well, I cry.
I cry almost everyday.
And I lie.
I lie to your face,
I say that I'm okay.
Sometimes I want to die.
As I watch my life go by,
I wish I knew I exsisted,
I wish there was something I could do.
But when I die...
Do you promise me you will cry?
Or will it be just another person that has to say goodbye?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Elizabeth (209.153.132.45) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 10:20 pm

Life

There is always going to be someone in your life that cares. You may not feel that they do but they really do. Will you do me this favor please try to go get help. Just talk to someone whether it is someone you dont know or some you do. Or you can even talk to me. There is so much good that you will find in life that is definetly worth it ok .
The One Who Died (24.107.137.153) -- Tuesday, October 28 2003, 03:38 am

...?

when people usually told me to go get help.. i took it the wrong way yano.. but.. Morgan.. dont take it the wrong way.. cus i just talked to my friends.. and they helped me out.. yano..
E'lisha (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 02:33 am

i feel u!!!!!!

hey,
2 who eva wrote this poem i feel u and i can relate.
i think it was very good and i hope u come famous wit ure poetry cause u deserve it!!!
best of luck!
~1~ love
Elisha
jeremy (70.249.245.188) -- Wednesday, April 13 2005, 06:10 am

get ya

i feel u
Jakkie (10.72.93.84) -- Thursday, December 10 2015, 09:46 pm

I feel like that

I'm standing on a cross road. Lost my mother 2 weeks ago. I have a loving wife. But I feel like there is nothing stopping me to cross over. I'm empty, drained,lost. Nothing is stopping me to cross over...
 
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