When by Nikkdizzle

When I first saw you
I knew you were someone I wanted to know.
When I first talked to you
I knew I wanted to be with you.
The first time you touched me
I knew you were kind and warm.
When you first told me you liked my best friend
I knew I would never have a chance.
When you found out that I liked you
I thought I was going to die.
When we first kissed
It made me like you that much more.
When you told me I was getting to attached
I didn't know what to do, I liked you so much.
When you would hug me
I felt so safe, nothing could hurt me.
When we danced and you sang the song too
It was like no one else existed.
When you left and didn't give me a hug or say goodbye
It was like my whole world had ended.
I miss you so much
I can't wait til' you come back home to me.

Terrie* (65.148.208.25) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 04:23 pm

very nice...Nikkdizzle
this was beautifully written....thank you for sharing,keep posting.

ym (207.190.93.74) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 02:02 am

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i loved it i loved it i loved it. it expressed to well how much it hurts to love and not be loved in return, i know the feeling too well...keep writing,you're a great poet!

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