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I Thought You Should Know
11 June, 2003
Author: Nikki

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I'm in love with you,
But you don't know it.
You come near and I Tremble inside,
But I don't show it.
There's alot of things I keep on sly,
So many feelings that I must hide.
You say goodnight and walk away,
Not knowing that it kills me inside.
At night I'm left with only my words,
I scream at myself
For I should tell you all that i feel,
If onyl I wouldn't cry.
You'll never know How deep my feelings do run,
'Cause for all you know is it's all in fun.
I'm fighting back the tears that threaten to overflow,
The emotions that will forever grow.
This is just something I thought you should know.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (172.17.25.25) -- Thursday, June 12 2003, 03:39 pm

wow!

This is an awsome poem! Keep it up! Its amazing!
Megs (207.200.149.232) -- Saturday, June 14 2003, 05:46 am

My feelings

I now how that feels, it's great! Tis amazing! Tis amazing
Gus (64.161.176.178) -- Sunday, June 29 2003, 10:38 am

It really touched my heart

This is something that Im living just now and it hurts so bad, Im glad there still people that care about others.
 
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