Driving In The Rain by Pamela O'Brien

I've known you since so long ago
How come we've never been here before?

Tonight, we spoke on another level
Sharing secrets with one another

A quiet drive on a rainy night
No awkward silences or questioning why

The last two people in the pub
Planning all the good times to come

You and I are made of music
Ready for something and ready to prove it

You've known me so for many years
How come we've never been here?

Maybe tomorrow we can do it again
Go for a quiet drive in the noisy rain

martin Vann (171.75.206.249) -- Monday, September 29 2003, 11:34 pm

Nice, Cozy Poem, reminds me of "Eddie Rabit"
Pam,
I also, love to drive in the rain, and listen to the radio, the good stuff, you know, where the artist such as yourself, use english.

MartinV
P.S.
I love a Rainy Night, you know how to reach me, if, you ever need me.

Pamela (66.38.146.193) -- Tuesday, September 30 2003, 03:16 am

Cozy....
I like that it came across as cozy because it was written with a very cozy feeling in my soul. Those rainy nights are definitely enchanting!
Thanx :o)

Ben (67.24.39.216) -- Friday, October 3 2003, 07:24 am

Sweet story with.....
Pamela, this is a sweet story with few words that creates feeling and says a lot. You have a good talent for writing. That last line, too, is soooo cool! I enjoyed reading it, and I thank you for sharing your talent here! ***Ben

Pamela (199.216.176.253) -- Friday, October 3 2003, 05:52 pm

Ben....
You are forever commenting and complimenting my poems - thank you so much for taking the time to not only read them, but also to think about them. I'm glad you liked this one because it came straight from my heart :o)
I love the last line too......!

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