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Routine Life
25 August, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Every morning I wake up
To the same feeling
The same people
The same little town

Every night I go to sleep
With the same emotions
The same dreams
And the same sounds

Every time I feel lonely
I do the same thing
The same routine
The same mistake

If ever I get a chance
I'll abandon the same
Find the right place
And embrace the change

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (171.75.206.249) -- Monday, September 29 2003, 11:05 pm

Pam, what a kick'em in the butt, poem!

Pam,

Day to night, day to night, it seems to be the same thing, over and over again, when will it ever change. My suggestion is, be the woman you have always wanted to be, nothing stops you, that is correct, nothing stops you from changing the day to night routine, but you!

Like a diet, instead of whip cream, try lettuce, or cabbage, it won't taste as good, but it sure is a heck of a lot better for you. Yea, you write about a complex, major problem that we "all" go through, try vegies and for get all those "fruit-cakes."

Yours,
Martin V
 
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