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Cocoon
24 September, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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A butterfly
Is unspeakably beautiful
Precious & Innocent
After it emerges
From it's cocoon

Often short-lived
It still captures attention
From all who encounter
The spectacle of
Wings spreading

Love, is much like a butterfly
We must be patient
In awaiting the final result
And remember
To appreciate it's beauty

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.232.61) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 03:55 am

Pam, this is lovely...

beautifully written.......thank you for sharing..i look forward to your next posting.
Pamela (199.216.176.5) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:29 am

Terrie

Thaanks so much! It came to me in a moment of inspiration and I quite liked it so I'm glad you did too :o)
Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:23 pm

Pamela, I like this poem's........

Pamela, I like this poem's simplicity and beauty. Using the beautiful butterfly to illustrate the patience required when it comes to love. I also enjoy your positivenes and appreciation for life and beauty that kind of "glows" along with what you're expressing. Thank you!
Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:27 pm

You R Welcome!

Well, you are more than welcome! And thank you, for appreciating the beauty of both the poem, the butterfly, and love.
 
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