Forever & A Day
23 September, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien
The turbulent lives we lead
Have destroyed our chances to be
But you remain in my memory
Forever and a day
Your love, it planted a seed
In the most meaningful part of me
It continues to grow deep
Forever and a day
In my heart I know you need
Somebody to set you free
So I'll wait to see if you see
Forever and a day
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Angel Laney (205.188.209.72) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 06:00 pm I can completely relate to this poem. Very beautiful and touching! I feel the same way about my special someone! |
| Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:24 pm Thank you once again, for commenting. This poem can be taken as beautiful and full of romantic devotion, or hopeless and filled with desperation. I feel a little of both sometimes, so I wrote it to see which side would come out more whenever I read it. So far, it's the good :o) Thanks Again. |
| Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 07:26 pm I enjoyed this one, Pamela, about how love keeps on growing and going on and showing compassion for that other person. I could see this becoming a song. I like reading your fresh work! Thanks! |
| Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 08:56 pm Nice idea Ben, I might try and do that right now! Make song out of it, I mean...... Thanks for the comment and idea! :o) |
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