Cradle by Pamela O'Brien

I sing sweet lullabies
As I cradle in my arms
This life I have created
The one that captured my heart

I stroke so very gently
As serenity settles in
All my life I loved you
Where is it that you've been?

I serenade softly
As I sit beneath the stars
This music I have created
With my beautiful guitar

Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Tuesday, September 23 2003, 12:45 am

I heard music.....
Pamela, I heard music as I read this. It has the makings of a song, for sure! Simple, beautiful poetic lyrics. Oh, and did I mention that I LIKE it? Ha! Ha! You have a real talent! Keep writing, girl! Let me know when your first CD comes out! Thank you!

Pamela (142.179.146.160) -- Tuesday, September 23 2003, 10:39 pm

Aw!
Thanks Ben, I was hoping this poem would reach somebody on some level :o)
To be quite honest, I am working on demo CD at the moment, and some of my songs came from some of my poems on this site actually......anyways, off topic. Thanks for commenting and I hope the music you heard was delightful.

secret (199.216.176.5) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 05:08 am

go girl
Hey dude i have told you all along that you would make millions with your poetry and your music. You are an inspiration to the world and dont let ANYTHING get in your way. With talent like this you can go anywhere

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