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Dim The Lights
16 September, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Close the curtains
Dim the lights
I'm going to show you what it's really like

Shut the door
Unplug the phone
Now you are going to really truly know

Turn of the radio
Disconnect the T.V
This is how quiet and dark it is inside of me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (171.75.221.92) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 02:42 pm

I like your place and soothing words.

Pam,

I feel comfortable, in your quiet, dark place and feel peace, restfulness. A hard place to find today, I may have missed your intent here, but this is how your poem made me feel. Very nice.

MartinV
Pamela (66.38.146.116) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:08 pm

Not necessarily

I don't think you missed the intent at all Martin, that's kind of what I was aiming for. Some people might interpret is as depressing, but I meant it as peaceful. Glad you liked it :O)
 
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