Golden
14 July, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien
Tonight is a silent night
And I'm entranced by the streetlights
The soft amber glow
Makes the rooftops look like gold
Tonight is a clear night
And there's not a cloud in sight
One particular star shines alone....&
It appears to be made of gold
Tonight is a mysterious night
And the lines are hazy, between wrong & right
With every minute I am growing older
But these moments are rare and golden
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Tarna (63.65.186.124) -- Tuesday, July 15 2003, 09:28 am To look at the sky and ponder the view. I could almost put myself in your shoes as you looked over the view. Feeling the energy of the darkness... And your humanity.. Good work -Tarna |
Katrina (68.116.64.38) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:17 am I loved your poem. It was so peaceful reading it in silence. Just imagining each and every detail in my head. Beautifully written! ~Trina |
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 12:21 am I like this poem, Pamela! Some good imagery. Thanks for letting us see into your golden view. |
Pamela (194.125.159.197) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 07:27 pm Wow! Your responses are also "golden"! Thanks guys, I was definitely having a moment when I wrote this one, reflecting on nature and the peacefulness of the night. |
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