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Upside Down
13 July, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Scrambled my are words use like life the I
Hidden my like emotional are emotions my abuse
Confused all the I for are of feelings feel you
Not which lies which true sure are and are

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (63.65.186.124) -- Tuesday, July 15 2003, 09:41 am

Hmmmm

might it I good be think...
(kinda reminds me of speaking hungarian ...now where are those accent marks)-Tarna
KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 04:54 am

humm

Interesting, just I don't quite get what you're saying! Sometimes it's just nice to speak and not make sense. Still I liked it!
Pamela (194.125.159.197) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 07:33 pm

*Laughing*

Yeah, its a strange one but trust me, it does have an underlying message, you jsut have to decode it :o)
Here's a hint-every second word.........
Pamela (66.38.146.204) -- Sunday, January 11 2004, 02:08 am

It Says.....

Okay, okay, I'll tell you what it really says....


"Scrambled like my life are the words I use, hidden are my emotions like my emotional abuse, confused are all of the feelings I feel for you, Not sure which are lies and which are true."
 
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