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Love Me Love Thyself
1 September, 2003
Author: Agatha Weeks

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I know that I have done you wrong but don't take it out on me,
for I'm just an ordinary girl trying to find the woman in me.

It seems that when I stumble and fall rather than pick me off the floor,
you seem to walk all over me, it's clear that you don't like me any more.

I sense that you have turned your back on what once was your best friend.
Won't you please forgive me and love me once again?

I never meant to hurt you, you're everything to me, You're my life,
my dreams, my shining star, and will always be.

So let us join together and not dwell in the past,
for in forgiving me you forgive yourself, is that too much to ask?

I'll work with you, we'll start anew,
there's nothing in this world the two of us can't do.
But still I'll need your help, for I cannot do this by myself,
and you can start by loving me.

Love, you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantresss (204.32.65.109) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 12:26 am

Awesome Writing!

This poem was very touching from beginning to end, so beautiful. I loved it, keep writing-your great at it!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Wednesday, September 17 2003, 05:58 am

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Forgivness is usually a good start because after that you can be who you really are
jessica (143.105.8.12) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 10:56 pm

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wow, i really liked this poem-very moving and i sense where you're coming from!
Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Tuesday, September 23 2003, 05:52 pm

Forgiveness is necessary ......

This is a good one about forgiveness, one of the necessary ingredients of the bread of life, Agatha. I enjoyed reading it and it is touching. It is soooo true that we all need forgiveness for our imperfections! This peice is a good reminder of that. Thank you! Keep writing!
Pamela (142.179.146.160) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 10:23 pm

First verse

I love this poem, but especially the first two lines. They epitomize everything I am! I never found the words to say before but you have found them perfectly :o)
Keep writing
 
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