To Look And Touch
8 April, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien
A fleeting look
Can be a dangerous thing
Sometimes we jump to conclusions
And misinterpret what it means
An innocent touch
Can turn into fatality
Sometimes we long for a companion
And we ignore all reality
A distant heart
Can result in catastrophe
Sometimes I can't help but remember
How cruel love can be
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 02:58 pm Love is never cruel my dear. It's the kind of love of misconcepted feeling that we bore that makes us suffer sometimes.However, you have a nice style. simple that makes the poem striking |
| luc (68.74.121.133) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 02:29 am i know your words al to well. to well that i wished i didnt.. and you caputured that feeling so well.. good writing. |
| Crystal (206.214.64.100) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 08:48 pm Loved it! Straight LOVED it! |
| Pamela (194.125.159.80) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 08:56 pm Matter of opinion, one man's hell is another's paradise. Love has been cruel to me. You're lucky it hasn't to you ;o) Thanks for commenting! |
| KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 04:58 am Love can be cruel. Some have just not experienced what others have. Anything can be cruel, even happiness! |
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