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Lost
6 April, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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A sudden flash
A memory discovered
It had been lost amongst the rubble

The sudden emotion
Of re-living the past
A period you had tried to forget

A sudden thought
And the sadness comes
You remember now, the good times

A sudden tear
At the passion you once had
That was lost amongst the rubble

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.78.32) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 03:46 am

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you always seem to leave me breathless with your wonderful words. keep on writing pam.. :)
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:03 am

Wow!

I am speachless, i love your writing. I think this one is my favorate so far!
Pamela (194.125.158.125) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 06:44 pm

Aw, Sweet

*Blush* Thanks a lot you two, these comments are probably a big reason that I continue to write.
Makes it all worthwhile that someone else enjoys the poem too you know? :o)
 
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