Like Night & Day
9 March, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien
In the dark
I become a shadow of somebody else
Simply a silhouette
Stretching across the dusk
Searching for something…..
In the light
I blossom into a beautiful flower
Bursting with enery
Bouncing back and forth
Beckoning you……
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (205.188.208.166) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 11:31 pm I like this! Good writing!! |
| Pamela (194.125.158.230) -- Wednesday, March 19 2003, 07:09 pm LinzAy Thanks for always commenting, means alot even if it is just a word or two! |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.168) -- Wednesday, March 19 2003, 10:43 pm Yup! Always commenting only because i'm always liking your poetry! And with my miniscule mind....a few words are all i'm able to spit out, so you better appreciate 'em....lol....just messin... |
| barb (66.46.241.156) -- Wednesday, March 19 2003, 11:02 pm linzay the short comment is good .you know the saying the shorter the better. you got your point across sometimes words get in the way by the time you finish reading the topic you forget what the topic was.lol oh good writing pam |
| MartinV (67.30.64.132) -- Wednesday, March 19 2003, 11:39 pm Pam, I love flowers, especially, those that burst into the sunlight, radiating energy, exlirated by warmth and the desire to be touched, gently and admired. Beats, the dried up wilting effect of the cold, unfeeling darkness. Pam, we all love beautiful flowers, thanks for giving me a look at you. I like what my minds'eye sees. Beckoning you? You tempest you, I got rid of all my animal skins, will pure lust do? Very good poem, Thank You, think I'll give you a pet name if you don't mind, How about Sunray? Then I can begin all my future comments about your poems with, Hey, Sunray. Nobody will know but you and I, and of course, everyone else who loves poem about flowers, as I do. Thank You MartinV |
| Your Sis (161.184.46.251) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 02:22 am Hey dude another great poem... Once again you splendor me.... Keep it up. See you soon |
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