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S-o-l-i-t-u-d-e
4 March, 2004
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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S omebody must crave my presence
O r am I completely alone?
L ove manages to escape me
I n more ways than one…..
T here’s got to be some answers
U nderneath it all
D oesn’t anybody crave my presence?
E ternally I call……

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 08:36 pm

this

was an unique way of expressing your self cool
barb (66.46.241.67) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 04:21 am

I like

I did a poem in this manner last year called b r o t h e r when I first got this computer. I like this type of writing.
Pamela (159.134.136.209) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 01:03 am

Yeah

I have been doing a lot of these poems lately, because I find it calming to write an entire poem based on one word. Sometimes when we feel something, we can only think of one word to describe it. Well, I take that one word, and elaborate to create a poem of sorts. You should all try it sometime, it is neat to do and interesting to see people's reactions!
I would love to read your poem Brother Barb - let me know if you want to share.
 
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