Make It Real by Pamela O'Brien

If I close my eyes
I can almost make it real
Your arms around my waist
My hand upon your face
The kiss we’re about to steal…..

If I close my eyes
I can almost taste your lips
Feel your breath against my skin
And the tickle of your fingertips…..

If I close my eyes
I don’t have to try
To resist the attraction between You and I.

ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Sunday, March 9 2003, 02:29 am

no title
nice... really reminds me of me and my gf i might have to show her this peom i really like it

keep writing

ryan

Pamela (159.134.136.209) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 01:06 am

Ryan.....
:o) Hope she likes it - just don't lie and say your wrote it, nothing worse then telling a girl you wrote something for her when you didn't!
I am glad it captured the moment well for you.

Your Sis (161.184.46.251) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 02:34 am

Derrik
Hey again.... I know who this is about :)
You'll see him soon when you are home. Keep a smile on your face.

Pamela (194.125.159.8) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 07:25 pm

Nope.......
Fraid' not Sis. This one is about 'you know who' that I mentioned in the e-mail. Notice the last lines. It was killing me so I had to write a poem about it.....

Martin Vann (65.57.56.145) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 07:42 pm

Like the view of your closed eyes, warm sunrays, I feel.
However, all good thing will sometimes come to a shadowy, end? Stealing kisses, I feel another's shadow here? Yet, shadows will give way to sun light, assuming that you "open" your eyes to what you saw, when they were closed. There are may sun's rays out there and there is one that will warm your heart, you just wait, be patient, Sunray, you will see!

MartinV
Delicate poem, hope I didn't rough it up.

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