It Feels So Right by Pamela O'Brien

It feels so right
Your arms holding me tight
In the cold and otherwise unwelcoming night

It feels so good
Like a tender hug should
If I could describe it better I would

Just wanted you to know
That you feel like home

LinzAy (205.188.208.70) -- Sunday, February 16 2003, 11:05 pm

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I love this poem and can totally relate!! I feel so safe from everything like i'm at home whe someone's holding me........good writing!

Martin Vann (65.57.57.79) -- Sunday, March 23 2003, 10:26 pm

Very Warm and Comfy.
Sunray;

Fire-light or candle light, huggies are good for grown-ups as well as for babies. Its poems like these you write, that brighten up my day, another reason, I like to call you Sunray.

Thanks, MartinV

Pamela (194.125.159.8) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 07:27 pm

:o)
Warm and comfy - I like that because those are the feelings I HAD inside when I wrote this poem. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

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