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Goodbye - Poetic Letter
22 January, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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To the Conquerer of my Heart, I am not quite sure where to start....

I write to share with you a few last things that my breath simply could not utter. It's been months since I've held you in my arms but there is yet to be another. As we speak I am miles and miles away, beginning an entirely new chapter - but sometimes when I sleep at night I can still hear your soothing laughter. There's so many things that I've realized that could've changed the way you look at me now. Perhaps if I would have cherished you more we could have made it through the rough times somehow. I'm not unhappy with my life but I feel somewhat incomplete. But rebuilding it from the empire I had with you has been an incredibly challenging feat.....

I know its too late for anything to change but I had to remind you of this much. You are a beautiful person, with a beautiful soul that only the most deserving will ever touch. And for those time when you feel down, cover your heart with your hand - that is where I am.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Marci (204.248.60.10) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 04:45 pm

Very touching

This poem has touched my heart so deeply. You have written everything so perfectly. I couldn't have said it better. I can relate to this poem so much that it brings tears to my eyes when I read it. I am in the process of losing someone....and I feel lost. I don't know if he will ever come back. Please keep writing. You are doing an amazing job :o)
Luc (68.74.66.2) -- Friday, January 24 2003, 01:39 am


that almost made me cry. it brought back memories.. :|
it was a good poem. a very good poem since it obviously made me think. and just like marci said. uh yeah dunt feel like writing down what she said. heh. good poem. keep on writing.
LinzAy (152.163.188.162) -- Friday, January 24 2003, 08:49 am

......

That was beautiful......
Pamela (66.38.146.118) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 01:12 am

Means Alot

It means alot to me to have you guys comment on this poetic letter. I was crying when I wrote it and it becomes just that much more special to have shared it with you guys.
And Marci - don't worry. You'll get through :o)
Seizure (68.155.232.81) -- Wednesday, January 29 2003, 04:17 am

good stuff...

One of your better ones Pam. I liked it a lot...
Pamela (204.225.80.19) -- Thursday, January 30 2003, 09:14 pm

Right On

Glad to hear it Seizure - though this one might be a little too sentimental and sappy for your liking :o)
 
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