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The Many Sides Of You
22 December, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Are You Really Who You Seem To   Be?
Your                   Do                     Be
Eyes                   I                        With
Beckoning         Believe?            You
Me                                                Is
Or              I'll                              That
Have You Never Experienced    A     Fantasy?
I                Understand                 Dream?
Lost          Your
My            Mystery
Sanity?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (64.108.201.110) -- Tuesday, December 24 2002, 07:21 am

hmm

~* claps *~ my goodness pam you have outdone yourself this is...marvalus... at first i have to admit i thought it was some math problem i was all like what the f**k...hehe nice one though keep up the great work
Pamela (66.38.146.29) -- Tuesday, December 24 2002, 07:17 pm

Yay!

I am so happy you liked it - I wasn't sure if people were gonna think it was cool or that I had finally lost my sanity....
LOL
Poor Dreamer went through quite some time trying to get it to look right - Thanx Dreamer!
The Geezer (67.25.98.128) -- Tuesday, December 24 2002, 09:30 pm

A nice picture!

I tolded you that you are clever with words. "A picture poem of words" like a cross word puzzle. I love it! You amaze me all the time. Wow-we! I'm going to look at that again! Thanks! Just my thought:(Is part of losing one's sanity, part of being a creative genius? Hmm, I wonder?)
Pamela (66.38.146.29) -- Tuesday, December 24 2002, 11:02 pm

*blush*

Wow, I wasn't expecting that reaction! Thank you for your kind words! Creative genuis, I doubt it - but I think it's wonderful to try and keep poetry refreshing so that it never goes out of style. Coulda been any one of use that wrote it. I have noticed the extreme talent on this website even more so lately.... I guess the idea came from the fact that he is like a puzzle I am attempting to figure out. Maybe I'll do a sequel poem one day with the answers to all the questions :o)
Xeracy (64.12.96.102) -- Saturday, December 28 2002, 08:15 am


I liked trying to figure it out. It was really deep. It is a fun piece to read. Enjoyable. 8C)
Pamela (66.38.146.29) -- Saturday, December 28 2002, 07:45 pm

Xeracy....

Fun to figure out eh? I actually showed it to a friend and she was annoyed that she coulddn't understand it! Glad you enjoyed it :O)
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Thursday, January 2 2003, 03:47 am

HOLY ...... BLEEEEEP !!!!!!!!

Pam... OMG... This is soo creative.
I really really really love your poem girl !!
You are EXTREMELY talented and VERY unpredictible.
Great Job!!
~Stacey
Pamela (66.38.146.29) -- Thursday, January 2 2003, 05:31 am

:o)

Thanx Stacey! Wow, you musta really liked it cuz you used exclamation marks and everything!
LOL
 
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