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Glimpse Of You 2
21 May, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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I may not know the depths of your soul,
But today you gave me a glimpse,
And I haven't felt the beat of your heart,
But we shared a gentle kiss,
I think we'll probably get the chance to share our forbidden secrets,
And I'll tell you your face is in my memory and that is where I'll keep it
And I may not know the crevices of your mind,
But I'm slowly feeling my way,
And you reassured my friendliness,
When you came to me for a hug today,
I may even have the privelage of seeing you go the extra mile,
I wonder if a thousand years of anguish,
Could make you forget my smile?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.186.80) -- Wednesday, November 20 2002, 03:01 am

bravo

love it. just like the first one. though this one i fell in love with each line.
Pamela (66.38.146.88) -- Wednesday, November 20 2002, 04:17 am

Words I Should Say

The guy I wrote this poem for (and part 1 obviously, and "Undeniable attraction" and "passion games") was originally just a lust. Just some cutie that I found myself uncontrollably attracted to. But now, I am beginning to care for him a lot, and someitmes I think I should just say these words so that he knows....
Luc (67.37.183.81) -- Wednesday, November 20 2002, 05:13 am

hmmm

well i say just tell 'em already. well thats what i say. whats wrong with saying it? at least you'll get it 'off your chest' right. though maybe he wont feel 'just' the same and might not feel the same making you feel all hurt and such. though what do i know huh. just a mindless little basrard. ^.^
Pamela (66.38.146.164) -- Saturday, November 23 2002, 12:11 am

Not Mindless

You are not mindless, but easier said then done. Besides, it doesn't matter now - he kissed me the other day so obviously he feels the same....
And hopefully, soon I will have the courage to tell him I am crazy for him!
Lux (64.108.205.86) -- Saturday, November 23 2002, 01:15 am

.............

awww thats just cute. > i didnt say that. :P well yeah hopefully. ^.^ hopefully it turns out the way you'll want it too.
 
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