Sense-uality
27 October, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien
I wish I was the water when you waded in the river,
So my waves could wrap themselves around your barenaked figure
I wish I was the blanket that was used to keep you warm,
So my folds could take the shape of your nearly flawless form
I wish I was the cider lingering sweetly on your lips,
Or the air that gently caresses every inch of your skin
There are a lot of things that I wish I could do,
All of which allow me to engulf myself in you
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Luc (67.37.229.235) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 05:56 pm wow, that was beautiful. theres nothing else i can really say een though i wish to. kinda left me speechless per say. o.0 ^.^ good job. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.78) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 10:39 pm Did it really leave you speechless? Wicked! I love it when I can leave someone speechless :O) You just made my day, THANKS! |
| Luc (65.43.124.126) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 11:31 pm yep. creepy huh? well im glad i made someone's day ^.^ |
| Pamela (66.38.146.78) -- Monday, October 28 2002, 01:32 am You know, if theres one thing I have learned in life, its that for every person who makes your life a living hell, you make someone elses a living hell. And for every person that puts a smile on your face, you also put one on someone elses. |
| Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Monday, October 28 2002, 01:38 am i agree |
| Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Tuesday, October 29 2002, 12:16 am What beautiful words & thoughts-Wow!! |
| Babygurl (216.135.36.228) -- Tuesday, October 29 2002, 01:22 am Great poem, loved the way you worded it. Keep up the good work! |
| Pamela (66.38.146.184) -- Monday, December 2 2002, 03:17 am I gave this poem to the guy I wrote it for, and he couldn't believe it! I know that sometimes people who don't write poetry have a hard time interpreting it, but I think this one was pretty clear :o) |
| Xeracy (204.113.161.186) -- Tuesday, December 3 2002, 07:45 pm I LOVE the way you captured the moment. It's really hard to show what is going on instead of telling. You did a good job at putting the reader there to see this and to picture this. It was a wonderful trip away from reality. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.184) -- Thursday, December 5 2002, 01:31 am Thank you! I am so delighted that I created an atmosphere for you to enjoy - even if it was only a temporary escape from reality :o) |
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