Treacherous Terrain
20 September, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien
Through the tapered curtains and the blanket of candlelight,
Their lovers embrace could be seen that night,
Their silhouettes dancing with the flicker of the flames,
She told him that she loved him and he told her just the same.
The music seeped through the windows to serenade the stars,
The constellations full of promises that this love would just be ours.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Monday, October 21 2002, 11:52 pm It's me again anyways well written.Very beautiful i wish the guy i like would say the same to me but yet look whos talken i don't tell them i love them. yea i know i'm korny. anyways well written another one of your fanastic poems. |
| Pamela (205.206.128.10) -- Tuesday, October 22 2002, 02:43 am You know, sometimes things are better left unsaid. If you hesitate to tell him, perhaps there's a reason? Best of Luck |
| Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Tuesday, October 22 2002, 10:58 pm Hey pamela you said if i don't tell him then it might be a reason behind it? I hope so or whatever,i really have strong feelings for him. O and do you believe that love at first sight can happen at a young age like 15?just wondering. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.67) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 03:42 am Well, I hate giving advice when I do not know the entire situation and/or the people involved. It usually ends up coming back and biting me in the butt - but since you asked..... I believe in love - Definitely. Love at first sight? I'd have to say no. Attraction at first sight, sparks at first sight, connection at first sight - Yes. But the biggest problem with relationships today is that people are mistaking attraction for love. Age, I am hesitant to say because everyone is different. Some fifteen year olds don't know love from getting the giggles when they hear the word sex - others are mature enough to understand there is something deeper. And to be completely honest my best advice would be to not think about it so much - go with the flow - listen to your head and your heart, and find a happy medium. Hope it all works out |
| Tiffany (216.54.14.84) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 02:59 pm Thanks alot because like its been really bothering me lately. I didn't really know what to do. I guess i don't have to worry anywayz because unforntuantly his gone. well he stills lives here like mabye 10 min. from here. what i mean by gone is that he goes to another school. But you know I'm not thinkin about sex or what he looks like its just the way he makes me smile and i don't know its weird right now i'm 16 1/2 and i'm still thinkin of him. I have dreams about and everything on top of that i can't help but cry when he is gone. i miss truly. anywayz i'm gonna writting now. so thank you and please keep writing those beautiful poems. |
| LinzAy (209.240.198.63) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 07:47 am Hey Pamela, thought that was the sweetest poem.... |
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