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Comfort In Unfamiliar Places
10 October, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Sometimes the darkness brings upon our fears and insecurities,
It can raise up our doubts and the feeling of inferiority,
But sometimes I find the darkness to be full of tranquility,
A place where I am surrounded by unfamiliarity.
Why the darkness is comforting is a mystery to me,
Perhaps its because I can escape from reality.........

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Roy (205.188.208.106) -- Friday, October 11 2002, 10:19 am

Yes

the sun can shine bright or the rain falling all around with it's musical sound yet listen in the dark for the beauty that comes from your heart
roy (205.188.208.106) -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 06:23 am

can't help it

over this one I went to inneroom to write one too
roy (152.163.189.67) -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 12:14 pm

the darkness

this poem hits me and I seek the darkness to hide from the light--I honestly am amazed to find someone that can discribe the darkness as friend--how you made your way down the corridors to my private room is a surprise
there aren't any light switches on the walls
Pamela (205.206.128.10) -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 09:02 pm

Roy & Roy

You guys sure do read a lot of my poems eh? I am touched to know that I touched you on such a personal note with my words. In answer to your question of how I found my way down your corridors Roy, I must say that I didn't. I found my way down mine, and perhaps they are so very alike that I've found my way down yours accidentally.
ROY(SMILEY) (152.163.189.67) -- Sunday, October 13 2002, 04:41 am

PAM & PAM

YES! YOU are very good and if I haven't printed them they are in my heart(yer poems) --I do not understand your deepest thoughts and I suppose you will never let down your sheild--me either--I'm going thru fire- not with my wife--just me and the lack of self repect--O I can come back and write you a poem and have already done so with Becky but it got lost--look for this other one. maybe Becky will post it??? I swam down deep in sea of strong currents--<snip! email address
withheld -Dreamer>--I don't worry with anything and take pain as it is given--reply
Pamela (205.206.128.10) -- Sunday, October 13 2002, 05:38 pm

Roy (smiley)

Well, I know who you are now!
As for my deepest thoughts, I do not even understand them, that is why I write poetry - to tap into them and get a better grasp on myself. I would love to read this missing poem and hear your take on my deepest thoughts as well....
As for the self-respect, don't beat yourself up about it. If we didn't all have a lack of it at
some point or another, we would be even more egotistical and selfish then we are now. It keeps
us humble sometimes you know :o)
 
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