Rejected Again by Pamela O'Brien

Every time I think I've found someone great,
I end up rejected again.
And just when I think things are going my way,
I end up rejected again.
When I see my reflection in the mirror,
I end up rejected again.
And when a friend attempts to get nearer,
I end up rejecting them.
I sure hope this means something to somebody,
Or I'll end up rejected again.

Seizure (68.154.2.211) -- Sunday, September 22 2002, 05:04 pm

down to earth...
It was very well written and I could see myself in most of it. One of your better ones Pamela..

Pamela (66.38.146.63) -- Wednesday, September 25 2002, 02:04 am

It just spilled Out
Sometimes I write poems without even looking at it until I am completely done. They usually end up being the ones that are the most truthful, because I don't even have time to reconsider my words. I'm real glad this meant something to somebody ......

ROY C. CLAXTON JR (67.212.39.182) -- Wednesday, September 25 2002, 01:32 pm

rejected
great! that the boat that passes by on sea with no lights--I am ready to jump overboard to turn on the switch and set the music free

jennifer$ (207.157.146.18) -- Thursday, September 26 2002, 11:32 pm

ooohhhhh
ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how sad

Pamela (205.206.133.61) -- Saturday, September 28 2002, 05:51 am

Sarcastic?!
I am not sure if its just me trippin', but was that last comment being sarcastic or something? It's hard to interpret over the computer, no facial expressions to go by or anything :O)

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