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To Look Away 2
16 September, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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The steady silence that continued so relentless,
Causing an awkward atmosphere and leaving behind disappointment,
Reminds me somewhat of your feelings towards me.

The chilly breeze that blew so insistently,
Bringing a sense of discomfort and sending a chill down my spine,
Reminds me somewhat of your eyes so cold.

The sadness that grasped me heart so demandingly,
Squeezing every ounce of strength I had left in my body,
Makes it impossible to look your way..

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barb (206.191.91.205) -- Tuesday, September 17 2002, 06:43 pm

pain

Reading this I sensed that you were unlucky in love, but I bet you kick butt playing cards you know the saying unlucky at love but lucky in cards. all kidding aside I'm really sorry it caused you pain.
 
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