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Lonely World
29 March, 2004
Author: PoeticDemon

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You sit alone at night, your conscious eats at you it feeds on you! You cry and cry dreaming of a better tomorrow you think to yourself that it cant get much worse but somehow it Always does and you end up in a worse situation, You hate your parents you want to die but there is one thing keeping yourself from suicide and you cant figure out who or what it is and in a way… you don’t want to. Some things are better left not knowing who or what they are, once you do find out or if you find out what or who it is can you be sure its worth living for? and if it is can you be sure you can grasp it and hold on to it forever?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.201) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 07:21 pm

Lonely, lonely

Hey PoeticDemon I love the description of your poem, while I read it!!
Nice job!!

Have fun, and take care!!

Meridian
James (24.15.118.213) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 07:08 pm

Thanks

Thanks Meridian
~James~
heaven (10.113.44.144) -- Monday, April 19 2004, 06:21 pm

hey james...

i really like this poem!!it's really good.
PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 07:54 pm

Thank you

Thanks!

love ~james~
brianna (64.53.184.240) -- Sunday, June 3 2007, 06:01 pm

i felt.........

i felt the exact same way........but yes there is always hope..sometimes your destiny is whats waiting for you...maybe its not now maybe not tomorrow but your purpose will come...everyone has one, i really enjoy reading all your poems even if i didnt comment on all of them i read them all...you are a great writer you can use your words to help yourself and others not feel so unbelievable alone
 
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