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I'm Sorry
16 March, 2004
Author: PoeticDemon

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I said i'm sorry
I meen it, its true
Everytime i pushed you further i cried
I wished god would just let me die
I beg for forgivness from you!
You just dont have a clue
I would miss you way to much
I dont care if you call me a jerk and such
Please dont hate me
I'll try to be good, as good as i can be
Sorry i scared you w/ suicide
That night i cried
I started to call
But then i started to ball
I prayed alone that night
The first time i prayed we would not fight
I was not nice
I didnt think twice
I'm sorry! i know what i did was wrong
I've known you for so long!
i'm sorry i made you so sad!
i'm sorry i made you mad,
But i guess this goes to show
I'll always be there for you like an older bro
I'm Sorry...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.209.7) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 07:50 pm

PoeticDemon........

I hope whoever you're dedicating this poem to reads this so that they can forgive you. Your words touch me as if I could've wrote something similar to someone I know.
The Perfect Poem; nice one James!
James (24.15.118.213) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 02:35 am

Thank you

Thank you i really appreciate it and yes she did forgive me, thanks for taking taking time and reading my poem
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 12:19 am

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u r such a wonderful writter!!u have such talent!!!
brianna (64.53.184.240) -- Sunday, June 3 2007, 06:08 pm

hmmmmmmmm

in my own head i think first you should forgive yourself before you ask others for them to forgive you........but you still write so lovely
 
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