Give Up
27 January, 2004
Author: PoeticDemon
Maybe I should just give up
My life is just nightmares and schemes
Just a bunch of dreams
I barley get by day by day
There is nothing more I have to say
A tear drips down my face, a single lonely tear
Suicide is my one and only fear
I grasp the blade firmly in my hand, and I placed it against my wrist
With both hands I made a fist
Closed my eyes and I made 1 last wish
I did not look
Only one slow painful motion it took,
I felt the bright smooth red blood run down my hand
The pain I've felt all my life i could no longer stand
I finally did what i wanted to do for so long!
I finally realized suicide is wrong!
… It’s to late now,
I just decided my fate
I fell to the ground, bleeding, screaming, crying
Then... i smiled realizing I'm so glad I'm finally dying.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (205.188.209.42) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 07:25 pm PoeticDemon......you'll be missed terribly if you make a suicidal attempt on your life. Please don't do it. Live for God, for your friends, for your family! |
| PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 12:22 am Thank you for your post and this was a poem i wrote a long time ago, i'm not suicidle like i used to be anymore, Thanks for reading this Meridian ... ~James~ |
| Sara (216.39.188.235) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 01:10 am hey i just wanted to say that ur poem is great. i used to feel the same way and thx for lettin ppl know ur not doin that anymore. WE CARE FOR U. =) |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 02:34 am ur such a great writter James,and u no i love you and i never want you to even think about or consider suicide ever again!!!ur a great writter!!love ya-heaven |
| James (24.15.118.213) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 12:15 am Thank you Sara i appreciate it , and Thanks heaven your a great writer 2 and i love you 2 |
| Julianna (67.71.131.123) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 10:34 pm Thank you for sharing. And thank you for still being in this world today! |
| PoeticDemon (24.15.118.213) -- Saturday, July 3 2004, 07:59 pm anytime.. and i'm glad i'm still here to |
| brianna (64.53.184.240) -- Sunday, June 3 2007, 06:13 pm this poem is nothing like the james today!! take a look at the past and see how much you have changed!! i love the way your words hold its rhythm and how i can feel the same as i read your words....just simply amazing |
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