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I Wonder
6 April, 2004
Author: KrBr

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I wonder if he thinks of me
When it's quiete and he's alone
I wonder if he remembers my number
Each time he looks at the phone
I wonder if he hurts inside
When they play our song
I wonder if he yearns for me
When a couple strolls along
I wonder if the memories
Keep him up at night
I wonder if he wishes
That we have never broken up
I wonder and question
Till my wondering runs out
But most of all
I wonder if he wonders
What I'm wondering about

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.117.8) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 02:16 am

We can only hope

Hey KrBr! He's probably wondering! Let's hope so!
Good poem KrBr!

Meridian
Pamela (66.38.146.126) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 03:20 am

Awesome

I like how you ended that - after confessing all that you think about this guy, you finally admit that your biggest fear is that he isn't thinking the same things. I know how that feels but I was never able to capture it so well as you have here.
Nikki (209.159.225.150) -- Wednesday, April 14 2004, 01:51 am

Me too!

So beautifully said! Breaking up sucks!
 
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