This Is My Goodbye Letter by Fallen_Angel

Thoughts retrace my mind
While fingertips lay red painted in blood
You separate me from the rest
Point out the mistakes
Inside of me this is my good-bye letter
To my razor
Laying there to my salvation cut the skin
Take away the consternation
This is my good-bye letter to my Father
While your fist last imprinted upon my bones
I'm sorry I must have made a mistake
I did something bad or you wouldn't be so mad
This is my good-bye letter to Jesus
Maybe if you have showed your self it wouldn't have come to this
As the sun goes down I can feel you betray me
You'd let the devil steel thee
This is my good-bye letter to my tears
I help inside
Good ye to my mother I'm sorry I imprisoned you to this hell with daddy on earth
Don't me next to you please
In your tears,
Please don't cry mommy
This is my goodbye letter,
To the blood that's fallen upon the ground feeding the devil with deceit
I bleed can you feel me
Bury me next to my knife
In the grave that holds my ruptured life
As my bones begin to disintegrates in the winter
Snow upon my cemetery
I lay here warn inside hells flames
I taste your tears that fall upon the cold of the snow
Burry me six feet deep into the ground
Bury me six feet deep to keep you safe
Stay away from my grave
Say good night,
This is my good-bye letter
Bury me save inside the ground while the
Light shines upon my grave melting the snow
As another season goes
Hold my breath
Sacred death
This is my goodbye letter to my family and friends
This is my good-bye letter to Jesus
And you're so called love and heaven
All the things I was to learn disappear in this earths hopeless destruction
Killed me slowly with my disbelief I see you
There smiling over my grave
This is my good-bye letter to my brother,
It was too hard to take from daddy
Why didn't you come save me?
As the tears begin to be cried I lay in this dirt another gone in a worthless pray
We all die sometime I just chose today

someone (66.215.248.153) -- Sunday, April 11 2004, 12:42 am

hey
that is deep

Sara (216.39.188.116) -- Sunday, April 11 2004, 01:53 am

wow
i agree with 'someone' that poem is prety deep n touchin. i just hope u aint talkin serious there...

Mallisa (24.116.254.82) -- Wednesday, April 14 2004, 11:41 am

no title
thanks

shan (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, May 5 2004, 04:13 am

oh how ive felt this way
this made me tear up.. it's like i was talking myself. i've felt this way many of times, and just melted away into sleep or nothingness until it went away and faced another day. this poem hit my heart. i really hope you're ok.... keep writing yo!!

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