Paris
9 April, 2003
Author: Ryan
just hearing your voice
could make me happy on the worst day
just the way you trust me is enough to drive me mad
you tell me ur secrets i keep them,
i tell you my secrets you keep them
there is just something about you
that makes me feel like you could do no wrong
it seems like you are perfect in every way
i cant find a single thing wrong with you
to me you could do no wrong
when you hug me i feel like
hey i could stay like this forever
but you have a boyfriend and i respect that
and you know i have the most respect for you
and i think that is what keeps out friendship strong
i have many more things to tell you
not one anyone else here knows
i trust you with the world
and you know i love you
love you lots paris
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Ghost (198.81.26.9) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 04:54 pm I'm in the same situation Ryan. Good poem I think it really shows your feelings for this person. |
| CrYsTaL (206.214.67.73) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 08:13 pm Great poem, Ryan! I really liked the way you came up with such unique form to saying how you feel for a girl(if it's real life, that is). But still, it's a great poem, now one of my favorites. |
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 10:13 pm yep sure is real life i love her to death but she has a bf and im fine wit that |
| ErinBrenna (24.175.194.221) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 11:45 pm Paris is really a great person, I used tobe in the biggest fight with her but now I realize how great she is and we are friends. I'm glad you can see that too. |
| Paris (24.175.25.223) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:01 am Ryan thank you so much for the poem! Its so sweet and it means so much to me! Im so glad I have a friend like you that I can trust and tell anything to that I know would never desive me! Erin I also thank you and Im sorry about everything we went through before! Your so great! THANK YOU SO MUCH! LOVE YA! Paris |
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 02:25 am A poem... straight from the heart, what a treasured gift to give such a good friend. I think this poem is absolutely beautiful, and it made me smile. I hope your friendship lasts a lifetime. ~ Stace |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 05:28 am This is soo cute! Nice poem. You two should be together, someday. |
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