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I Told You
23 March, 2003
Author: Ryan

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i told you something last night
i hoped wouldnt change a thing
i thought maybe we could feel be the same
i thought that maybe i could change your mind
i knew what you said would change alot
any time you need me you know that ill be there
you know how i feel about you and now how you feel about me
i thought that maybe there was just a little chance of you feeling the same
i hope that maybe one day maybe you will feel the same
until that day i will wait and stay with someone else or be single

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Comments on this poem/writing:

kyle (24.153.177.14) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 01:07 am

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ryan its good. i like it a lot. i couldnt tell if that was about the army comment or what. but i love you and you know it.
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:33 am

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I have no right to say what i think this poem is about or what i think you should do cuz i dont know! but if your talking about waiting for a girl than i suggest that you should not wait but exxecpt what her decision is because waiting will just take up time and make you miss out on other things in life. If this wasnt what your poem was about than sorry but think about what i said and remember that there is always hope....
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 04:00 am

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yes it totally was very nice advice thanks
 
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