Suicide
12 February, 2003
Author: Ryan
i lay on the floor
i look at the river not god but i have made
as i see the mighty river flow
i wonder how long ago you where tryin to stop me
i tell u no just let me go
you gave up now i lay on the floor
mighty rapids are forming on my wrist
the biggest rapids ive seen in a long time and probably the last i'll see
i sit here bleeding now wondering why i did it o crap i dont want to die
o god o god why did i go and do this
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 10:56 pm I just wanted to let you know that this poem really touched me. I've felt like this before and i'm sure a lot of other people have as well. Things should get better Ryan. Try to hang in there and always remember, If we didn't have the shitty times in life, we would more then likely take advantage of the good times. Hold your head up high... no matter how hard things get. Keep writing, sometimes it helps :) ~Stace |
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 11:57 pm thank you stacey i love to know people do care cause most people that do care care more then i do thank all of you |
| ryan eason (24.153.177.14) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 11:14 pm thank you stace things have been getting better i have a wonderful girlfriend i think i love her she makes me smile i have never seen her not smiling which always makes me smile ryan |
| lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:47 am if you die you would have not made the friends you did on this site.I care for you.keep yor head up.like aaliyah says if at first you don't suceed dust yourself off and try again.smile |
| Mark Spencer (205.188.209.7) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 02:01 pm We're all pulling for you Ry guy. I pray you will never have to experience this kind of thing again. As Aaliyah and Lasohnda said; dust yourself off and try again if you first don't succeed. But if that doesn't work, tighten up your belt, get tough and open up a can of whoop-ass. Life can't kick your butt if you don't throw in the towel. You have a lot to offer this world. Hell, you could be President one day. Who knows how far you could go. Remember the rabbits in the pen? I think you're more like the one who wouldn't give up and eventually escaped. You wouldn't be writing, and posting your poems on this website if you were anything like the first rabbit that gave up and was put in the stew. I can't speak for anyone else on this site, but I can speak for me, and I believe in you kid. Mark |
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 06:53 am dang yall man im surprised you remembered yall are better friends then the people i have at school and mark you have some great sayings |
| Leah (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, March 3 2003, 02:13 am I dont know who you are but i do know that everyone has somthing special and unique about them. I belive that you can standstrong no matter what you are going through. I will always be here to listen to your problems if you ever need me. Good luck! |
| Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:42 am I don't know if this was tre but youve survived for a reason yes a reason. Stay strong it shows that you are. I use to wish i was never created cuz than i wouldnt be living and i alqways say stuff like i wish i was dead and i hat eliving but deep down i know its a blesing because of my family and well i gotta go : ) |
| Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:42 am I don't know if this was tre but youve survived for a reason yes a reason. Stay strong it shows that you are. I use to wish i was never created cuz than i wouldnt be living and i alqways say stuff like i wish i was dead and i hat eliving but deep down i know its a blesing because of my family and well i gotta go : ) |
| Roy (64.12.96.204) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 02:38 am is this real? do you feel this bad? i can't read behind the words of your heart except something sad |
| Ashley Grier (67.75.225.122) -- Saturday, June 14 2003, 11:49 pm Wow This is a really powerful and moving poem ! It sounds like something one of my friends would write ... His name is Ryan . I write poems too but I personally don't think mina are any good anyways it's great and thanks for sharing it TTYL |
| Sage Warthen (198.81.26.104) -- Tuesday, June 24 2003, 11:05 pm I hope you hath come to peace with this writing and started a new one about life, love, and happiness....please e-mail me (snip: sent privately) can help |
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