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I Want To
28 January, 2003
Author: Ryan

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i sit there,
i try to tell u how it is.
u say i cant get help if i dont talk,
y would i talk that only makes things worse,
u say that it will feel better when we talk about it,
i want to tell u but i fear,
i havent talked in a year have i forgotten,
i try but no words come out,
i want to,
i want to

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole (69.3.125.143) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 06:47 pm

I know

Know how it feels..
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Wednesday, February 12 2003, 03:27 am


did u like it i wrote that when i was at rehab center tryin to stop cuttin i was there for 3 months and in the end i stopped im proud
Samantha (24.175.18.235) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 12:22 am


Now Ryan, great poem I think it is very good. Keep it up babe. If you ever need to talk, I'm herre :)
Izzy (64.12.96.103) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 03:01 am



As for the poem Ryan. I like it! Sounds like a little inner mental monolouge. Good job man.
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 04:06 am


well see during the first month of rehab i didnt talk.... at all to no one i stayed with myself then one day it jus came out i know im wierd
LinzAy (64.12.96.41) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 10:08 am

......

poem, very good. talking about ur problem, even better. quitting cutting....awesome. Keep it up-the writing and not cutting.....and if u ever need anyone to talk to all of us are here for im sure!!
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Monday, February 24 2003, 02:47 am


thank u linzay by the way cool way to spell ur name if u wana talk my a.i.m. name is runs n underroos
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:43 am

very good

I'm proud of you,keep it up
LinzAy (64.12.96.103) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 11:27 pm

Thankyou Ryan!

thanx for commenting on my name spelling!1 hehe.... runs in underoos? hehe ok...mine is Fingertoez .....
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:44 am

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I can understand . Once i wanted to say something soooo bad but the words literally wouldnt come out!!! I scaares me to think that my fear was just as strong as how much I wanted to say it! It killed me both ways! and yes people say talking will help but most of the time it only makes things worse!!!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 11:26 pm

Nice!

I like this one too! I can toattaly understand where you are coming from!
lulu (216.28.152.111) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 01:04 am

great

great poem, i understand you because i dont like talkin much about my problems either but it helps when i do
 
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