Killing Me
29 January, 2003
Author: Ryan
Little girl
In my world
You have given me
nothing
Biting me
Kissing me
Loving me
You're killing me
Now I'm lost
Now I'm gone
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Samantha (24.175.18.235) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 12:19 am This one is very confusing, I don't get this, maybe it's too deep. |
| Izzy (64.12.96.169) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 02:58 am letting stuffs out huh? |
| lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:41 am I guess thats why their yours because you wrote them poems don't have to make sense to no body but your self although confusing to me also. good poem because thats how you felt |
| anthony (12.42.65.142) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 05:19 pm your poem is nice and it is relaxing |
| Martin Vann (63.208.45.154) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 06:01 pm HEY! Ryan, Sorry, didn't mean to yell! Your poem makes a lot of sense to me, a lot. Good thoughts, simple, very easy to understand, that is because my mind is a little one. I remember a beutiful song entitled "Killing Me Softly With His Words"...,her words in this case} Do you remember that one? Am I close? My friend Barb, who calls me a "Smart A" will love this one, simple words with tremendous effect. I am impressed and love it! MartinV |
| Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:30 am I'm not sure what your poem meant exactley but i think it might mean that this little girl has taken over you r life in a good way and your lost in care for her?! anyway it was interesting and i wish you the best of luck in whatever your feeling..... |
| scott (24.156.99.40) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 12:44 am I get it but it's kind of weid. |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 11:25 pm Its not weird, its unice i love it! Verry non original! Keep writng. I want to read more! |
| kaitlyn (199.71.141.254) -- Monday, June 2 2003, 02:08 pm nice poem right some more that are evene better |
| Ashlea Murphy (144.139.57.120) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 11:48 am great poem ilove it it just i was look for!!! |
| Froggy (67.23.148.70) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 02:27 am ........Wow......Thats pretty good dude.It touches my heart. ;) |
| Camary (216.186.16.34) -- Wednesday, October 1 2003, 05:04 pm People are saying "ohh how deep" and "how relaxing" thats hella funny but its not relaxing. |
| ? (64.12.96.102) -- Saturday, November 8 2003, 09:52 am i didnt understand it |
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