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Stareing At Me
29 January, 2003
Author: Ryan

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Under my bed
the dead man lies
I can hear his breathing

Behind the curtains
my dead friend awaits
If I pull away the curtains
I'll see him grin

In the window
there is a face
staring at me

Dead man, dead man, go away
Come back another day

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Samantha (24.175.18.235) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 12:25 am


Holy crap, that is SWEET! Good job, scary but that's what I love about it. Good, muy buen. Te amo!
Izzy (64.12.96.107) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 03:03 am


-grin- =]
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 11:16 pm


thanks y'all i know y'all care which makes me feel good thank u so much samn and izzy lov ya
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:53 am

smile keep it up

I write poems to keep me going every day and expressing myself through my poems make me feel worth everything I once thought i wasen't worth .smile
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:46 am

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I think your afraid of losing some 1 in your life remember that other people might be afraid of losing you as well........
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:46 am

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I think your afraid of losing some 1 in your life remember that other people might be afraid of losing you as well........
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 11:28 pm

interesting

I dont understand much but it gave me a scary feeling!
 
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