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Dave The Octopus
1 December, 2001
Author: Sami Finley

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I met an octopus under the sea
I looked at him
He looked at me
He sat in a cave
His name is dave
I tried to say hi
but he was rather shy
He zoomed away
In a blurr of pink
And I was left in a sea
of black ink

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole Fritz (24.28.33.50) -- Friday, March 7 2003, 01:39 am

Dave the Octopus

That was a cute little poem,and was funny too.I wish I had the talent you do.
LinzAy (152.163.189.100) -- Monday, March 10 2003, 07:56 am

Sami

Cute poem!! I wish i had the talent you do at your age...you're going to be a great poet as you get older....heck! you already are!
barb (66.46.230.194) -- Monday, March 10 2003, 09:35 pm

sami

very good imagination and way with words. you have a way with words I loved it
sami finley (204.196.123.2) -- Wednesday, March 16 2005, 08:58 pm

great!

Hey even if i wrote this poem i still think its to cute!
sami (66.168.108.19) -- Saturday, July 9 2005, 06:24 pm

cute

it's so funy
 
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