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Stuck In The Dark
21 September, 2003
Author: Sarah Taurus

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Caught in a mist of time,
Choosing the right way,
Unsure of where to go,
As I wonder what will become of this day.

Fairy tales and myths,
How they are all the same,
Do not know how to explain
The feeling of this strange game.

We all wonder where this life goes,
It’s Scary to think of the unknown,
But time will tell and show us right,
As I am filled with such fright.

Something will become of my life,
That I know but still I’m filled with much strife.
Now we can go on to the unknown,
Knowing the way that we all have to go.

We go to this place and sit here in the dark,
Wondering what this comes out to be,
But we are never afraid,
for you and I are free.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Silkened Moon (206.214.64.75) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 05:24 pm

Niiiiiiiiiiice!

I really enjoyed this poem and its profound beauty. Strange to say, it kind of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland, due to the fact that it kind of explains how she felt in Wonderland, and it explains how we feel in the world we try to explore; never knowing whats going to come with the day! I loved it! Very cool! Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Sarah Taurus (64.57.108.40) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 08:19 pm

thanx

yea I didn't think any of it would make sense bacause it was kind of my feelings and emotions... you know... well thank you and i'll keep writing "Silkened Moon"
- Chanel
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 09:32 pm

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Theres no need for us to be mad...it's childish and we have a great friendship okay?...I love you chanel..muah~Gucci
Sarah Taurus (64.57.108.23) -- Thursday, November 27 2003, 02:34 am

yea

yes, I agree and this is something we can work out without being at eachother's throats (not that we were or anything) but you know what I mean.. I love you and I will talk to you later okay? bye
 
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